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falling
Contributed by
deadbloodyrose
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Friday, 25th June 2004 @ 01:17:21 AM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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they say once you hit the bottom, the only way is up
how do you know when you've reached the bottom of the pit
everyday gets worse, every thought more depressing, suicidal
thought i'd hit the bottom, thought i'd be on my way up
stil falling down, becoming darker, scarrier, more severe
vines and branches scrape and cut my skin open. bleeding
nobody with me throughout my fall, constantly all alone
dont have anyone at the top, arm extended offering to help
once i hit the bottok i may not retun to the top, surface
possibly die on the way down, get hit on head by tree
rock could fall from above crushing me, all of my hopes
hungry snake at the bottom jaws open, sharp venemous teeth
cant seem to reach out and grasp anything on the side
wish i could hold onto it and atleast stay at that level
get stabalized and pull myself up, climb to the top
im stuck falling, cant find anyway to escape, get out
nothing left to do, quit struggling let it all happen
wheich everything as they fly by, they all leave
they rise up as i fall down, my life is falling
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Re: falling
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by eatfresh22 on
Friday, 25th June 2004 @ 01:25:23 AM AEST
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Very depressing. Full of emotion and sadness. The visuals were good though. It seemed like a movie. Nicely done.
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Re: falling
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by ladyfawn on
Friday, 25th June 2004 @ 04:31:35 PM AEST
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yeppers...............
hugs n' love nessa
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