|
 Menu
|
|
|
|
|
Social
|
|
|
|
|
i,m broke and u can't fix it
Contributed by
grip-wth-broken-fingers
on
Friday, 25th June 2004 @ 04:36:36 AM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
|
all this time
i,ve been force fed your lies
and felt i had to keep them down
cutting through my arteries
this pain is unbarable.
you dont see me laughing
you hurt me so bad
so why am i still waiting ?
you took away my dignity and pride
as you stood there watching my world subside
i miss you i admit but why did you do it
left me saw numb bleeding
these scars are to deep
they wont seem to heal
you took away my childhood
replaced it with painful memories
replaced my pride with shame
i used to be your little girl
now i havnt even got a ***** name.
Copyright ©
grip-wth-broken-fingers
... [
2004-06-25 04:36:36]
(Date/Time posted on
site)
Advertisments:
|
|
|
|
|
|
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
|
|
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry
Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any
comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please
contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title
etc.
|
|
|
Re: i,m broke and u can't fix it
(User Rating: 1 )
by xSlashXPrettyXSkinx on
Friday, 25th June 2004 @ 05:14:07 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
Wow. I kind of sense a lot of anger in this poem. I like the line "force fed your lies"... cause that is sooo the truth. Thank you for sharing this. Excellent job.
Lindsey |
|
|
|
· 
Poetry
Site Help
Members
Areas
Reference
Search
Top
Others
