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The Lucky People
Contributed by
nail-to-the-head
on
Friday, 25th June 2004 @ 11:28:27 AM in AEST
Topic:
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In this world, full of luck,
People say how much life sucks,
Relationships that break and fail,
Others living life in a fairy tale,
Prince and Princess, live happily ever after,
Lives full of love and plenty of laughter,
This is the few, the lucky people,
Horse pulled carts, married under a steeple,
Theres only a couple, soul mates from the start,
Love for each other, bound by the heart,
I can now say, I am one of these few,
I found my soul mate, when I found you.
+ nail-to-the-head +
13.06.04
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Re: The Lucky People
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by apollo on
Friday, 25th June 2004 @ 11:35:31 AM AEST
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whomever your wrote this about is one lucky person. the flowing of your words and your emotions expressed are truly breathtaking. you have a real good talent.
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Re: The Lucky People
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by ladyfawn on
Friday, 25th June 2004 @ 11:54:57 AM AEST
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your title made me curious, and its truely a beautiful poem, and oh, i just love your ending, simply lovely:) hugs n' love nessa
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Re: The Lucky People
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by lovespoetic0518 on
Friday, 25th June 2004 @ 04:32:55 PM AEST
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I really liked the ending, good poem.
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