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The Pixies
Contributed by
pixie
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Friday, 25th June 2004 @ 12:19:20 PM in AEST
Topic:
fantasy
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They are such beautiful creatures,
With tiny hands & dainty features,
Little hats upon their heads,
Using flower petals for their beds.
They dance in the garden at night,
They are so small,only 6 inches in height,
You have to get so close to see,
Them running & skipping about so free.
I long to have one of my own,
Keep it as a pet until its full grown,
Then set it free into the sky,
Cry a tear as I say my goodbye.
I have counted 5 in all,
Id love a friend who was so small,
They are so amazing to look at,
Watching them flee when they see a cat.
Their little wings look so delicate,
Their appearance is so immaculate,
Ill take this secret forever with me,
That I share a garden with some Pixies.
Copyright ©
pixie
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2004-06-25 12:19:20]
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Re: The Pixies
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by WinterFox on
Friday, 25th June 2004 @ 12:24:04 PM AEST
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Such a cute and sweet write for your namesake..I guess it takes a pixie to see a pixie..I've never been that fortunate..
A nice write, Pixie...Mike |
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Re: The Pixies
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by SnowB on
Friday, 25th June 2004 @ 12:37:35 PM AEST
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Very cute and enchanting poem...loved it!
Lena |
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Re: The Pixies
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by ladyfawn on
Friday, 25th June 2004 @ 12:44:32 PM AEST
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oh this is adorable!! hugs n' love nessa
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Re: The Pixies
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by frejya on
Friday, 25th June 2004 @ 12:48:02 PM AEST
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cute.......just
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Re: The Pixies
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by deadbloodyrose on
Friday, 25th June 2004 @ 05:44:52 PM AEST
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| i love pixies.. and your poem was brilliant.. you did a really nice job on it.. it has perfect rhythm and flow.. very well done.. AMI JO |
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Re: The Pixies
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 25th June 2004 @ 07:23:08 PM AEST
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Absolutely adorable. I have fairies in my garden so I understand your delight.
Rita |
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Re: The Pixies
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by Luinil on
Friday, 25th June 2004 @ 09:32:13 PM AEST
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| very sweet and lovely :)* |
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Re: The Pixies
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by blueheart on
Friday, 25th June 2004 @ 10:33:38 PM AEST
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You've described pixies to be so elegant and beautiful.
A very lovely nickname if I should add.
:)) |
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Re: The Pixies
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by venkat on
Saturday, 26th June 2004 @ 02:57:35 AM AEST
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| wow..very elegant and beautiful.. venkat |
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Re: The Pixies
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by MLCstar on
Sunday, 27th June 2004 @ 03:02:55 PM AEST
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| Wonderful theme. I enjoyed it but I have to say that some of the wording is a little rocky. |
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Re: The Pixies
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by jayson on
Friday, 2nd July 2004 @ 03:49:45 AM AEST
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The poem was cute,a delightful read.:)
I also want to thank you fro your comments as well.:) Jason (jayson) |
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Re: The Pixies
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 4th July 2004 @ 10:50:59 AM AEST
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this reminds me of 'the borrowers'
oo memories
PFR |
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