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My Letter To God
Contributed by
BlackRoses00
on
Friday, 25th June 2004 @ 08:09:42 PM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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Each night I watch the clouds bleed,
Bleed their suffering out with me.
And each night, I let my heart concede,
Alone and here for God to see.
Each night I walk outside of here,
And lose my tears in the rain.
Although my heart is filled with fear,
I ask if God can feel my pain.
This lost moon wept its tender lullaby,
As pale moonlight caresses my face.
And each shimmering diamond that I cry,
Falls within Gods own space.
Each day my letters are mailed away,
Through my calm and uncaring faade.
But what I really ask each day,
Who reads my letters to God?
-Joey-
Copyright ©
BlackRoses00
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2004-06-25 20:09:42]
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Re: My Letter To God
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by ShadowDaughter on
Friday, 25th June 2004 @ 08:19:27 PM AEST
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Very nicely done . . . loved the last stanza especially. Great poem, overall.
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Re: My Letter To God
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by imaginary on
Friday, 25th June 2004 @ 08:30:33 PM AEST
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| This poem is so good, i mean...wow. I love it. I know how you feel, please keep writing. I think you have a great talent. |
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Re: My Letter To God
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by angelav on
Friday, 25th June 2004 @ 09:04:51 PM AEST
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| Maybe your mind and intellect doesn't 'believe', but your spirit knows. God is in the air, the clouds, the rain, in tears and in laughter. He communicates His presence through the beautiful words that flow through you. Nice work. |
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Re: My Letter To God
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 25th June 2004 @ 09:22:44 PM AEST
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He doesn't need to read them, He was behind you all the while you were writing them.
Angel always.....godspeed...joni |
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