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The Wonder of It All
Contributed by
merry
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Saturday, 26th June 2004 @ 06:53:54 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Incredible wonder of the world and all that jazz Spitting in the wind and making wishes Life aint so bad she says with a cynical grin You smile and shake your head but cant agree You only smile to please her and pretend its okay Thinking she wont notice but youre sure she does Put another quarter in the jukebox, play another tune Keep dancing in smaller circles, closing in There was never any place to go anyway So here we are face-to-face, identical opposites Giving each other a reason to live again Keep hope alive that clouds are cotton candy Let me rest my head on your shoulder I hear your heavy sigh as we sway to the music Lost in loves unkindest spell, gone but not forgotten We hold on tight all through the night Shower me with kisses and Ill try not to cry Struggle with crowding memories of love that went all wrong Then as if Fate noticed us she waved her magic wand Showered us with loves silver dust, put starlight in our eyes
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Re: The Wonder of It All
(User Rating: 1 ) by little_genna on
Saturday, 26th June 2004 @ 08:41:02 AM AEST (User
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I cant believe im the first person to comment on this poem. this is just stunning beautiful and tender with an edge of sadness.wow i just love it and relate so much it makes me want to cry because i once felt love.
love and hugs
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Re: The Wonder of It All
(User Rating: 1 ) by Jishes_4_ever on
Saturday, 26th June 2004 @ 03:05:45 PM AEST (User
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This is a great poem
Can't wait to read more of your poems.
Good write
Jishes |
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Re: The Wonder of It All
(User Rating: 1 ) by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 26th June 2004 @ 03:38:29 PM AEST (User
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awww....... so sweet gaille!!!! simply beautiful:) hugs n' loves ya sis, nessa
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