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Let it be
Contributed by
buchi
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Saturday, 26th June 2004 @ 10:52:08 AM in AEST
Topic:
toughstuff
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As I steer myself into the future.
I peruse over my shoulder.
I am horrified.
Eyewitness of the tarnished past
Man in indescribable suicide
Love extinguishing, decaying away.
Do I really want to know?
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buchi
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2004-06-26 10:52:08]
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Re: Let it be
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by venkat on
Monday, 28th June 2004 @ 06:16:14 AM AEST
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| Oh..it is a sad vision. awesome write. venkat |
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Re: Let it be
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by arden on
Thursday, 1st July 2004 @ 11:14:58 AM AEST
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*agrees with comment above*
very awesome write. few words wrote but alot said.
nicely done.
i liked it, 5 stars.
Arden |
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Re: Let it be
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by buchi on
Thursday, 1st July 2004 @ 11:37:15 AM AEST
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| Thanks Arden... |
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Re: Let it be
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by Rhei76 on
Sunday, 4th July 2004 @ 11:26:01 AM AEST
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| Very good write. |
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Re: Let it be
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by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 8th July 2004 @ 08:37:48 PM AEST
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haunting....... my breath actually caught in my throat! lol, hugs n' love nessa
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Re: Let it be
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by a_bear on
Tuesday, 5th October 2004 @ 01:11:24 AM AEST
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| sad comment about mankind..leaving a trail of tears. I would like to know how you happened upon "cotton candy" it has been deleted"...? |
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