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speechless
Contributed by
rugby_player
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Saturday, 26th June 2004 @ 01:39:07 PM in AEST
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I speak but i'm not heard
Is it because i don't talk
Or is it because you don't care
When i say what i feel
You just turn your head
I speak but i'm not heard
I try to love you
But what do i do
When you can't hear the words
Do i give up?
Or do i try harder
For some reason the words i speak
Don't get through
I speak but i'm not heard
I talk louder
But still no luck
I sit here in pain
Wondering why you don't see
How much i love you
I say it everyday but
I speak but i'm not heard
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Re: speechless
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by apollo on
Saturday, 26th June 2004 @ 01:41:30 PM AEST
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how can you say you are not very good? this is amazing. i hear where you are coming from. it is hard to sit in pain all the time and when you try to profess your love for somebody it just seems they have other things. i hear ya rugby player. just hang in there, good things will come.
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Re: speechless
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by holderofthestone on
Saturday, 26th June 2004 @ 07:06:39 PM AEST
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| I must say that this speaks very loudly to me. you packed some strong feelings in here. Never doubt your abilities my friend your style may be different but you have a talent with your words. A++++ |
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Re: speechless
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by Living_In_My_Dream on
Saturday, 26th June 2004 @ 08:21:19 PM AEST
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I must agree with rugby this speaks loudly I like your style of writing its different but your own and you can go far with that...keep your head held high and;
When you can't hear the words
Do i give up?
Or do i try harder
I must say something for this if all else fails you grab her and look her in the syes and say listen sometimes you need to say it like that lol it works...well this spoke loudly to me keep it up keep it coming...and Ill keep reading your wonderous poems...
much love,
Dani |
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Re: speechless
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by pixie on
Sunday, 27th June 2004 @ 12:00:53 PM AEST
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this is such a powerful poem, it nearly knocked me off my chair
pixie xx |
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Re: speechless
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by emystar on
Monday, 2nd August 2004 @ 03:22:48 AM AEST
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I hear u loud and clear.
I agree with everyone else u have a rare gift of writing that few poses.
Another masterpeice!
luv, huggs, strength,
emy |
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Re: speechless
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by ProfessorReason on
Tuesday, 7th September 2010 @ 06:40:57 AM AEST
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| Check out some Henry Rollins poetry it sounds as if you can identify. |
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