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Someday
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SuperGirl
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Saturday, 26th June 2004 @ 04:01:19 PM in AEST
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Someday Ill know.
Just who Im supposed to be,
And who Im supposed to love,
And what Im supposed to see,
But for now.Im here.
My heart.gets broken,
And I shed my tears.
My world gets shaken
And I have my fears,
Buttheyre here too.
The ones who care.
The ones who are loving
And willing to share.
Theyre the ones who keep me sane
Who fill the losses,
And dull the pain.
I know God must send them here
To be angels on earth.
He knows whats best
No matter how I think it should work.
So thank you to those
Who have seen me through,
Who have heard my thoughts,
Ignored my flaws,
And loved me true.
Somedaywell all know,
But until then.
Im here.
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SuperGirl
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2004-06-26 16:01:19]
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Re: Someday
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by mdmorash on
Saturday, 26th June 2004 @ 04:03:04 PM AEST
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| Very cool. Good structure and rhyme. Nice... |
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Re: Someday
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by lostinmyself on
Saturday, 26th June 2004 @ 05:52:13 PM AEST
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This is great.
"Someday I’ll know….
Just who I’m supposed to be,
And who I’m supposed to love,
And what I’m supposed to see,
But for now….I’m here"
I love those first five lines. This passes through my mind every single day.
We are glad you are here.
Good write, nice rhyme.
*hugs* Phil xxx |
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Re: Someday
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by SuperGirl on
Saturday, 26th June 2004 @ 06:51:30 PM AEST
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| i just wanted to say thank you to those who commented. i only wrote this poem becuz a friend wanted me to. just to prove that i could write a poem. you're comments gave me a self-esteem boost!! thanks!! |
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Re: Someday
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by SocialMisfit on
Saturday, 26th June 2004 @ 09:34:37 PM AEST
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come on people tell her to write more. convince her that she has talent.
anyhow good job and its amazing as a frist poem. keep up the good work.
misfit |
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Re: Someday
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by Trisha on
Saturday, 26th June 2004 @ 10:23:14 PM AEST
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| Very Cute |
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