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Everyday, I die
Contributed by
thenewwayofhurt
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Sunday, 27th June 2004 @ 01:22:07 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Everyday it kills me to see you like this
Desperate and dreaming through your bedroom window
Everyay I die alittle more
Your downstairs at the kitchen table
Wondering if their is any life beyond the front door
I've already become dead to you but you haven't the strength to leave
Your walking alone on abandoned streets screaming "love is never what we hoped it to be"
Your words only fall short on deaf ears
I can never remember you being so distant
Is this really what you wanted?
I was about to tell you but the words never made it past my breath
But their is always tomorrow, I can tell you tomorrow
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2004-06-27 01:22:07]
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Re: Everyday, I die
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by emystar on
Sunday, 27th June 2004 @ 02:38:06 AM AEST
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Interesting, well written poem.
huggs,
emy
It reminds of Paul, (I think) in the bible made the statement "I die daily."
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Re: Everyday, I die
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by lovespoetic0518 on
Tuesday, 29th June 2004 @ 09:06:48 AM AEST
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Short and direct, very good.
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