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Looking throu my eyes
Contributed by
SkippysAm0r0n123
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Sunday, 27th June 2004 @ 05:48:41 AM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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I look at the world passing me by,i look at the slash in my wrist now theres a reason to cry,its the only pain i can controll. no one seems to know,why do i do this ***** to myself is what i hear you think you know everything adn you may chase away my fears you even say the thing i want to hear,but the things i need you to say seem to sray so far away i live everyday as if it is my last,hopeing each breath might take me back!!!
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Re: Looking throu my eyes
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by Jackee_line on
Sunday, 27th June 2004 @ 07:37:56 AM AEST
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| good vent, well done |
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Re: Looking throu my eyes
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by sicknivesevered on
Sunday, 27th June 2004 @ 09:11:32 AM AEST
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| Aye, good vent. Please try to format your work though more, if you would. Its much more difficult to analyze and try to capture all the true meanings of a piece when its in straight lines instead of stanzas. I enjoyed this. Its just hard to enjoy its as much as it could be. |
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Re: Looking throu my eyes
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by deathdrop on
Sunday, 27th June 2004 @ 09:36:32 AM AEST
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THIS IS SAD AND VERY MOVING STUFF!
BUT VERY GOOD THOUGH, I CAN'T WAIT TO READ MORE OF YOURS... |
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Re: Looking throu my eyes
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by deathdrop on
Sunday, 27th June 2004 @ 09:36:35 AM AEST
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THIS IS SAD AND VERY MOVING STUFF!
BUT VERY GOOD THOUGH, I CAN'T WAIT TO READ MORE OF YOURS... |
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