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emily
Contributed by
grip-wth-broken-fingers
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Sunday, 27th June 2004 @ 08:13:23 AM in AEST
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dear emily
i,m so sorry for what i put you through
i know you cant forgive me for what i did to you
i made you feel so alone
i just left you when you said you wanted me to stay
i,m so sorry for letting you do those things that day
dear emily
i never wanted it to end this way
i should have never left your needy side
but i was to selfish to stay
oh emily you said you,d be o.k
why did i listen to those words
but i trusted you and walked away
she said she never meant to take so many
but her thoughts became unsteady
she said she needed me and i wasnt there
but i guess i was too busy in my own demise to think for a moment and care
dear emily i,m so sorry
please find it in your heart to forgive me
i never ever left your side
until i started to lose my sanity
they said i was getting better
i didnt think so
that day i thought of myself wallowed in my self pitty
now i have nothing not even my sanity
dear emily i,m so sorry please find it in you soul to forgive me
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Re: emily
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by frejya on
Sunday, 27th June 2004 @ 08:52:44 AM AEST
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a very touching piece
well done
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Re: emily
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by apollo on
Sunday, 27th June 2004 @ 09:15:54 AM AEST
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emily is one lucky person. for someone like yourself to write something for this girl is one of the most wonderful things a person can do for another. emily will realize the love in your heart and she will come back to you, it has to be this way! take care and just keep your head up, keep shooting for the stars and emily will come back, this i am sure.
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Re: emily
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by sicknivesevered on
Sunday, 27th June 2004 @ 09:20:05 AM AEST
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| Grooviness. I can sing the line in my head: "Dear Emily, I'm so sorry - Please find it in your heart to forgive me". I love the way the Es flow throughout the motion. Good piece. |
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Re: emily
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by hooray_its_jen on
Sunday, 27th June 2004 @ 01:37:51 PM AEST
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If this doesn't make her forgive you nothing will. This is soooo sweet, and if I was her I'd be crying if I read it. Great job, this is a wonderful poem! Thanks for sharing.
Blessings
Love, Jen |
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