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Castle
Contributed by
luinil
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Sunday, 27th June 2004 @ 09:37:33 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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through the darkest forest,
up the steepest mountain
balanced on top of the highest peak
lies the gloomiest fortress,
the most wicked count, and
the dungeon of the deserted, dying, and weak
too high for the sun
too cold for the wind
too far for the bravest knight to continue
no reason to run
soaked in your sin
no valor left now, none to defend you
infinite rain
to dampen our will
the count needs little effort to dictate
self-inflicted pain
hopeless still
even the strongest shant survive this fate
here we are kept
shackled to stone
hoping tomorrow will bring an end
wishing we slept
or that sun shone
or that peak would no longer suspend
but time keeps taunting
and count keeps guarding
and no light shall ever be seen
no use in wanting
no hope for parting
alive, but perhaps weve never been
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luinil
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2004-06-27 09:37:33]
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Re: Castle
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by pixie on
Sunday, 27th June 2004 @ 09:48:31 AM AEST
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great poem , very dark :)
pixie xx |
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Re: Castle
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by Essentially9 on
Wednesday, 4th August 2004 @ 11:04:12 PM AEST
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| amazing write. |
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Re: Castle
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by Lips on
Monday, 7th August 2006 @ 03:26:31 AM AEST
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| Hey that was great imagery! Keep penning, I loved how dark it was ! |
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