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reckless
Contributed by
RockNwhls
on
Sunday, 27th June 2004 @ 11:16:04 AM in AEST
Topic:
fantasy
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finally, a moment alone
no others, no tv, no phone
pressing together, racing hands
seeking lips, undiscovered lands
cloth tearing, reckless in our haste
demanding freedom, no moment to waste
rapid breaths, in and out
passion building, no time to doubt
melting together, two become one
fruitful endeavor, fly to the sun
Copyright ©
RockNwhls
... [
2004-06-27 11:16:04]
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Re: reckless
(User Rating: 1 )
by shorty_52 on
Sunday, 27th June 2004 @ 12:31:58 PM AEST
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good poem. made lots of sence and rhymed really good. no i haven't felt like that but the poem was still really good. thanx for writing it.
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