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Nocturnal Kiss
Contributed by
MLCstar
on
Sunday, 27th June 2004 @ 04:22:42 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Darkened hearts no more beating Thirsty minds bent on feeding Slowly waken at suns setting On our prey who are fretting.
Here we come, almost flying People running, screaming, crying. No, dont run, it wont save you We are here to slightly drain you.
Your fear, we can smell it. Just for us, we compel it We only want one thing from you Dont you worry, it wont hurt you.
Well give you a silver kiss And send you to quiet bliss Fast and strong your blood is pounding. Its that for which were hounding.
Its so warm and refreshing Fang and neck around are meshing Blood is running red in beauty Will we feed? Absolutely.
With dawn coming, we are finished Now our thirst is diminished. Now to sleep, now so tired Till next night were retired.
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Re: Nocturnal Kiss
(User Rating: 1 ) by ladyfawn on
Monday, 28th June 2004 @ 07:42:23 AM AEST (User
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wonderful images and oooo! i dont know those songs but your words are great:) hugs n' love nessa
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Re: Nocturnal Kiss
(User Rating: 1 ) by pixie on
Monday, 28th June 2004 @ 11:06:56 AM AEST (User
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great write,
pixie xx |
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Re: Nocturnal Kiss
(User Rating: 1 ) by MissMandy on
Monday, 28th June 2004 @ 06:34:23 PM AEST (User
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that's a little creepy, but it's a good write |
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Re: Nocturnal Kiss
(User Rating: 1 ) by deadbloodyrose on
Friday, 2nd July 2004 @ 04:19:31 PM AEST (User
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great poem.. you did a wonderful job on it.. you commented on beautiful halloween that was posted under my name but written by jeff.. i thought id let you know that he got a sn now and posts his work there his sn is TheLastStringCut.. well take care.. AMI JO |
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