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Indescribable
Contributed by
MissMandy
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Sunday, 27th June 2004 @ 11:38:32 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Why can't I tell you
how I really feel?
We joke and we laugh
but you say what I want to be real.
Winking, you say I'm your love
you say I'm "too marvelous for words"
you smile and you tease
with "a love song from the birds."
But what you don't know
is I really feel that inside~
I think you're incredible
but this I continue to hide.
I want you to know
but I don't know how to say it
my mind is so confused
because you continually tease it.
All of my friends say
that I should be with you.
You think it's funny
but I think it's true.
Why can't I tell you?
Why can't you understand
that I'm crazy for you
like the beach is of sand?
Copyright ©
MissMandy
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2004-06-27 23:38:32]
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Re: Indescribable
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by SocialMisfit on
Sunday, 27th June 2004 @ 11:50:20 PM AEST
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i think i know exactly what u feel sometimes its a good write keep up the good work.
*hugs* misfit
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Re: Indescribable
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by JT on
Monday, 28th June 2004 @ 01:37:01 AM AEST
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great write. captures the frustration that Im sure many people can relate to
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Re: Indescribable
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by SuperGirl on
Monday, 28th June 2004 @ 12:33:41 PM AEST
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| Gee Whiz girl!!! another good one. you have captured a feeling i had never put into words!!! thanks!! love ya!!! |
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Re: Indescribable
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by Wachumiri on
Tuesday, 6th July 2004 @ 05:13:06 PM AEST
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I'm sorry. May love come your way soon.
Take care, especially of your heart.
David |
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