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A Thought
Contributed by
requiemforadream
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Monday, 28th June 2004 @ 12:21:03 AM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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A thought
A word
A cry left unheard
A torn mind
An empty life
A beautiful sharp knife
A stroke of the knife
A cut on each wrist
A river of blood flowing over each cleanched fist
A tear is shed
A body drops dead
A life ended full of dread
An nice finale of a life of failure
A way to stop the disappointment I cause
A final permanent pause
A last thought
A last word
A final cry left unheard
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2004-06-28 00:21:03]
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Re: A Thought
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by angelav on
Monday, 28th June 2004 @ 12:29:38 AM AEST
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| Truly a beautiful and eloquent poem. You are heard - and we want you to share more of your masterful wordsmanship. hugs-angelav |
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Re: A Thought
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by deadbloodyrose on
Monday, 28th June 2004 @ 01:06:40 AM AEST
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| very nice piece... you have a lot of talent i hope things get better in your life.. AMI JO |
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Re: A Thought
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by JT on
Monday, 28th June 2004 @ 01:32:55 AM AEST
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a great poem. thankyou for letting us hear these thoughts and words. hopefully there are more to come.
-jt- |
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Re: A Thought
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by pixie on
Monday, 28th June 2004 @ 10:54:07 AM AEST
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very well written, you have great style and your flow is spot on....
pixie xx |
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Re: A Thought
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by arden on
Friday, 16th July 2004 @ 10:53:00 AM AEST
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umm scary
there BETTER not be any true feelings behind this. lol
cuz youve got somthing to live for. as do i, as does everybody.
out of all your poems i like this one the most. its just like wow this is powerful. great work.
Arden |
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