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Why not me?
Contributed by
evil1
on
Monday, 28th June 2004 @ 02:47:43 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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I don't know why.....
why you lied...
i don't know why....
why your satisfied....
it hurts me so deep inside...
to know you never loved me
to know you will always hide....
the truth about how she makes you so happy....
it breaks my heart and i start to cry
because i don't know why.....
i don't know why....
why she reminds you of the sun in the sky....
i don't know why
it cant be i.....
that you love so desperately....
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2004-06-28 02:47:43]
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Re: Why not me?
(User Rating: 1 )
by crimsonbatlady on
Monday, 28th June 2004 @ 03:26:48 AM AEST
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I like it.
It flows very nicely.
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Very depressing though.
But, that doesn't take anything away from how good it is. |
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Re: Why not me?
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by kidpoet_213 on
Monday, 28th June 2004 @ 10:15:11 AM AEST
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Depressing... but good...
~Donna~ |
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