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Failing
Contributed by
Hannah_Heaven
on
Monday, 28th June 2004 @ 01:47:17 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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feel the pressure
the thought of everyone
that guarentee of hope
faith in you
but you yourself knows
that your failing
hasnt anyone else had someone dissapointed in you?
feeling low
dipping foe
realising your life had been but a dream
lived by some other being
you shudder to think
what if?
if i carried on
and ended up...lifeless
cold bored sallow
iam doomed to live my life
behind watching eyes
i can feel me at distance
but i cant stop myself
i feel so much
like a barbie doll
to plastic
to fake
to perfect
no flaws
just an addition to the super modelled life
im failing at being me.......
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Hannah_Heaven
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2004-06-28 13:47:17]
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Re: Failing
(User Rating: 1 )
by deathdrop on
Monday, 28th June 2004 @ 04:04:28 PM AEST
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i know how you feel.
but you're not completely worthless because your poetry is excellent!!!!
keep up the good work! |
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