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Crimson Ecstasy
Contributed by
WorthlesSanity666
on
Monday, 28th June 2004 @ 06:36:05 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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My crimson ecstasy,
take away the
deafening pain.
Blast away the walls of
static that are
disfiguring my mind.
Make the crying voices
and the wailing faces
fade away into a
numb and darkened obscurity.
This battered mortal body
cannot take this much feeling
anymore.
Copyright ©
WorthlesSanity666
... [
2004-06-28 18:36:05]
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Re: Crimson Ecstasy
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by LittleWillow on
Monday, 28th June 2004 @ 08:46:17 PM AEST
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| This is a really good poem. I'm reminded of a suicide poem I wrote because I put it under suicide poetry even though I'm not suicidal; it just sounded like the matching topic for it. You could tell people just wanted to scream "Don't do it!". I'm glad you added that comment. I should have done that on mine. Again, really awesome poem! |
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Re: Crimson Ecstasy
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by Essentially9 on
Monday, 28th June 2004 @ 10:18:44 PM AEST
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| a very good impression indeed. |
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Re: Crimson Ecstasy
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Monday, 28th June 2004 @ 10:42:43 PM AEST
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awesome write it put me down several different tracks the more I red it.
Keep it up. |
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Re: Crimson Ecstasy
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by pixie on
Tuesday, 29th June 2004 @ 12:23:21 PM AEST
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very well expressed.
pixie xx |
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