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The Deeper Music
Contributed by
thantos
on
Monday, 28th June 2004 @ 06:52:13 PM in AEST
Topic:
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in here
you are with me;
now listen to the sounds
of the melody,
the swiftness
of the notes
playing rapidly.
the keys stroking one another
the music splendid.
the nature becoming great
the triumph
Singing.
Swaying in the trees
is the music in the breeze...
Now I am
the one you are
now we have
become.
listen to the soul
spread your wings.
lifting me higher and higher...
every note
the melody.
swaying to and fro,
is the song of the night.
Copyright ©
thantos
... [
2004-06-28 18:52:13]
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Re: The Deeper Music
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by TheLastStringCut on
Monday, 28th June 2004 @ 07:06:07 PM AEST
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| Is that about sex? Sure sounds like it. That was an awesome write, it somewhat turned me on. Good job! Keep up the work, kid. |
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Re: The Deeper Music
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by MLCstar on
Monday, 28th June 2004 @ 08:24:32 PM AEST
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| I really liked this one. It is so simple and yet it says all it needs to. Different and lovely. I am impacted. Great work. |
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Re: The Deeper Music
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by LittleWillow on
Monday, 28th June 2004 @ 09:01:59 PM AEST
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This is a great poem. I love all the musical descriptions of everything. Music rocks!
~*LittleWillow*~
"Like a poem poorly written, we are verses out of rhythm, couplets out of rhyme, in syncopated time." ~Simon & Garfunkel |
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