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See Me, Hear Me
Contributed by
blackmarker
on
Monday, 28th June 2004 @ 08:01:47 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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Drowning in a sea of voices
A sea of smiling faces
Im part of that sea
Crashing beneath the waves
Screaming to be heard
But a thousand hungry voices
Swallow my own
So none can hear
And none will listen
Why wont you hear me?
Im part of that sea
That sea of smiling faces
Im crashing beneath the waves
My smirk struggles to be seen
But a thousand glowing smiles
Out-smirk my own
So none will see
None want to see
Why wont you see me?
You look at me
But you dont see me
You listen to me
But you dont hear me
Im screaming
Screaming to be heard
But you ignore my cries
My angry pleas
See me.
Hear me.
See my lips form these words.
Hear these words formed by my lips.
Im fine.
Back
The *****
Off.
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blackmarker
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2004-06-28 20:01:47]
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Re: See Me, Hear Me
(User Rating: 1 )
by xxbreathlessx on
Monday, 28th June 2004 @ 09:10:23 PM AEST
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| wow i liked it, strong poetry, but very good poetry |
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Re: See Me, Hear Me
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by Essentially9 on
Monday, 28th June 2004 @ 09:49:20 PM AEST
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| intriguing and very powerful. fantastico. |
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Re: See Me, Hear Me
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by sicknivesevered on
Tuesday, 29th June 2004 @ 02:22:14 PM AEST
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| I love it. The repitition was worked in flawlessy, but the ending is what makes it so great. It was like a punch in the gut. Great work. |
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