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Trail of Tears
Contributed by
fastpitchqt
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Monday, 28th June 2004 @ 08:06:20 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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An endless journey
An endless road
Dry, empty eyes
Thoughts of you
Never-ending pain
A trail of tears
Where will it end?
So many memories
So many times shared
So foolish was I
To have thought you cared
To have thought you were different
But I was wrong
You manipulated my mind
You deceived my eyes
You werent the person I once thought you were
You werent the person you led me to believe was the real you
So now I sit here
With this empty feeling inside
Feelings of loneliness and sadness
Left abandoned and alone by you
Its because of you I live in fear and pain
Its because of you I have trouble allowing myself to trust anymore
Its because of you I have this empty feeling inside of me
Its because of you I cant move on
An endless journey
An endless road
Dry, empty eyes
Thoughts of you
Never-ending pain
A trail of tears
When will it stop?
Where will it end?
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Re: Trail of Tears
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by LittleWillow on
Monday, 28th June 2004 @ 08:39:34 PM AEST
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| The first (and last) paragraph was the most intriguing. Very good. |
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Re: Trail of Tears
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by PumpkinPie on
Monday, 28th June 2004 @ 10:56:15 PM AEST
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You sincerely left me crying reading this.It really hurt to read words of a ressemblance exactly like mine.Every verse here,and I mean EVERY verse here represented exactly how I feel and it hurts like hell...I know how you feel,I know........
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Re: Trail of Tears
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by pixie on
Tuesday, 29th June 2004 @ 12:18:00 PM AEST
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so sad and emotional....... ine day you will feel able to move on, takecare
pixie xx |
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Re: Trail of Tears
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 29th June 2004 @ 04:03:28 PM AEST
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| yes, an endless journey, but there are always good times on the road - trail of tears was a good image - keep writing! |
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