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Party it Up
Contributed by
fastpitchqt
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Monday, 28th June 2004 @ 08:06:56 PM in AEST
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Lifepoems
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Party it up
You only live once
Be young while you can
Enjoy what life offers
Drinkin n smoking with your pals
Kickin back watching the days go by
Never realizing what will happen in the long run
So nave to the dangers
Car accidents
DUI
Lung cancer..
Liver cancer.
STDs.
Rape
Pregnancy
Permanent damage
Broken bones
Or even death
No one ever thinks of the bad things that could happen
If I said not to party
I would be a hypocrite, cause I party myself
Just be careful and party smart
Dont make foolish mistakes that can destroy your future!
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2004-06-28 20:06:56]
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Re: Party it Up
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by MLCstar on
Monday, 28th June 2004 @ 08:37:17 PM AEST
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| Wise and insightful. thank you for your good advise. |
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Re: Party it Up
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by xxbreathlessx on
Monday, 28th June 2004 @ 09:08:34 PM AEST
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| thts a good message, good job |
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Re: Party it Up
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by Essentially9 on
Wednesday, 4th August 2004 @ 11:08:28 PM AEST
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| it has potential. i dont think the last line fits this piece at all. i think the car accidents etc can just be left out or put into verse and not just listed. sounds like you have an exciting life, you better party smart, i want to read more of your great poetry =] |
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