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Sweetheart
Contributed by
Butterat_Zool
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Monday, 28th June 2004 @ 08:24:06 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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I heard a rumor youre a legendary afternoon romp,
wearing your heart round your waist,
And if youre so inclined, then feel free to stomp,
so long as I can catch a taste.
I have a dollar-fifty wager that youre poisonous in bed,
with the way that you wiggle and shine,
but a dollar-fiftys nothing for an afternoon of ****
and a promise that you always will be mine.
So a stranger sometime told me how youd meet him on the corner
and hed moan if perchance you never came,
but I love you in that quiet way a victim loves his coroner
and my lips will whisper nothing but your name.
So I thank you for the sacrifice that you made for my heart
and the sanity that youve saved my poor soul.
Your sweet, compliant, secret love has saved my aimless art
and your berry kiss has somehow made me whole.
Copyright ©
Butterat_Zool
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2004-06-28 20:24:06]
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Re: Sweetheart
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by pixie on
Tuesday, 29th June 2004 @ 12:16:50 PM AEST
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greatly written
pixie xx |
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Re: Sweetheart
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by wray on
Tuesday, 11th January 2005 @ 09:51:32 AM AEST
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Ooh! Very fun to read, particularly the contrasting tones: "****" next to "a promise that you always will be mine"? Hehe.. I think it goes without saying now that you'll have to explain your poems a bit first, otherwise I'll just be interpreting it any which way.
These lines had me grinning ear to ear (in pure enjoyment):
"but I love you in that quiet way a victim loves his coroner
and my lips will whisper nothing but your name."
Kindly include a 1000-word explanation of each future posting please ^_^ and yes, I'm slowly and fastidiously working through your collection. Goodbye sleep *sob* |
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