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Emerald Mist
Contributed by
LittleWillow
on
Monday, 28th June 2004 @ 08:35:16 PM in AEST
Topic:
NaturePoetry
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deep strands of emeralds
thrust towards the sky
rocky ledges, flowing waters
graceful sandstone arms embracing serenity
leaping fields of ecstacy
rushes of laughter carry the wind
sunlight flashes with great flamboyancy,
shimmering, dazzling diamond rays
peace and clarity ride on doves' wings
pure thrillness taken in
saves you from the depths of bitter darkness,
returning you to calmness
mockery with scenery of magnificence
jaded jewels roll like waves upon the shore
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LittleWillow
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2004-06-28 20:35:16]
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Re: Emerald Mist
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by TheVoice on
Monday, 28th June 2004 @ 09:18:57 PM AEST
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sounds like a beautiful place
the voice
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Re: Emerald Mist
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by blueheart on
Monday, 28th June 2004 @ 09:20:45 PM AEST
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Beautiful piece, I loved the metaphors you've put together.
' Deep strands of emerald '
' Diamond Rays '
Such captivating words.
Great job!! |
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Re: Emerald Mist
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by mdmorash on
Monday, 28th June 2004 @ 09:27:34 PM AEST
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| Excellent use of imagery. |
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Re: Emerald Mist
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by freespirit on
Monday, 28th June 2004 @ 11:16:34 PM AEST
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Great poem well written
my kind of poetry
have a good night
hugs |
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Re: Emerald Mist
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 28th June 2004 @ 11:22:26 PM AEST
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Your imagery is outstanding. Nice piece of work here.
Smiles,
Rita |
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Re: Emerald Mist
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by pixie on
Tuesday, 29th June 2004 @ 12:16:09 PM AEST
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lovely imaginery
pixie xx |
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Re: Emerald Mist
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by TheNextRobertFrost on
Tuesday, 29th June 2004 @ 09:02:14 PM AEST
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I'm going to lay down in this place! that is a wonderful poem! Good job!
T. A. B |
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Re: Emerald Mist
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by RobertKilpatrick on
Thursday, 1st July 2004 @ 12:56:33 AM AEST
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| This is nice, this is my kind of poetry, Love the use of words...Ive given you 5 points.. Lovely...and I don't often give points... |
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