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Angelheart Child
Contributed by
Butterat_Zool
on
Monday, 28th June 2004 @ 10:05:25 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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SSomething stirrd my s-o-u-l
Some thing stirrd me heart
Someting kissed my blissful eye a&d
Something broke (u/a)p( )art
Im not afraid of deathhhh
A sliver in the heel
som,ething like an angel
retahded in a co-coon
The highs, the lows,
the we(a/e)ken(e)d loads,
the joy in the child-spectres
dying eye-heart-soul over a nothing
The chillling music,
Trow da bass guitah!
and the dives he(e/a)dlong
into da awful crowds.
You do your lessons and they lessen
,just like Alice was told,
and eventually there are none more
and your (baptism/second birth) brings you out into the world of ****** rules.
Cahved in stone and unmended even by the strengff of logic,
I stare at the stupid-head mirror and let my unaborted inner child
illUmiNATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! THERE! TAKE THAT!!!!!!
NOW YOU (*GASP*) MAKE SENSE!?!!
What have i done? All those innocen(ts/ce) lost
The world cant function without deft, I mean, theft.
Take that and cry! Take kindly. The darkness culls.
The brilliance culls. The blindness c(u/a)lls.
Copyright ©
Butterat_Zool
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2004-06-28 22:05:25]
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Re: Angelheart Child
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 5th July 2004 @ 01:50:18 AM AEST
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you have the most interesting clever ways of writing, this flows perfectly, hugs n' love nessa
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Re: Angelheart Child
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by wray on
Saturday, 24th July 2004 @ 02:13:18 AM AEST
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| Oookay I won't even pretend to understand this one but it's fascinating to read and *try* to decipher the meanings in your words. And I'm not just liking it because it's "different" and because you've come up with an original way of packing one phrase with more than one meaning - this really is a fascinating, if somewhat bizarre (but what more can I expect of you?), piece. |
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