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Assaying The Storm
Contributed by
slayer_015
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Monday, 28th June 2004 @ 11:04:59 PM in AEST
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I am a vessel upon a sea,
Tossed about in misery,
Friend to all,yet none to me,
I have no beacon to steer me free.
I will not run,nor will I fail,
Til' I escape my present hell,
Though loneliness rip my tawdry sail,
And all the waters around me swell.
Storms shall arise as 'oft they must,
And I within them shall be thrust,
To restore the calm with sundered trust,
Until my soul inwardly rust.
When again I see the shore,
I will pray as I have not before,
For God to bless my wit and lore,
So I can stay there evermore.
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Re: Assaying The Storm
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 28th June 2004 @ 11:10:42 PM AEST
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This is actually a very meaningful poem. I think you really meant Assessing The Storm as that would make more sense. I got a lot of emotion from your words. Nice work.
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Re: Assaying The Storm
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Tuesday, 29th June 2004 @ 02:27:36 AM AEST
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| alot of feeling screamed out from this poem, beautifully wriiten, keep it up. |
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Re: Assaying The Storm
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by pixie on
Tuesday, 29th June 2004 @ 12:10:05 PM AEST
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greatly worded. will look out for more from you
pixie xx |
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