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My Only Fear
Contributed by
adamsbabygurlie
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Monday, 28th June 2004 @ 11:22:24 PM in AEST
Topic:
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You know one of my fears
Is to have falling tears
Fall down my face
When someone takes your place
I thought I had lost you
And you did too
I can not reach the finish line
Without you if youre no longer mine
I wanna deliver a message to you
That my love is so true
I cried so much
Cause I could not feel your touch
But now youre mine
So I have reached that finish line
Youre always there
To show you really care
I know my only fear
Is to have a falling tear
I thought my world was gonna crumble
When I fell to a tumble
When we said good-bye
I knew it all was a lie
I no longer cried
And no longer hide
I show people the real me
So let this be
So listen with your ear
And believe that I am near
I thought I was in to deep
That I was gonna take the leap
But you came back to me
Now well forever be
You know my only fear
Is to have a falling tear
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Re: My Only Fear
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by mdmorash on
Monday, 28th June 2004 @ 11:30:24 PM AEST
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| Nice rhyme and structure. I like the two line verse, and you used it very well. |
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Re: My Only Fear
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by slayer_015 on
Tuesday, 29th June 2004 @ 12:36:40 AM AEST
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Great poem,
love in verse,
awe inspiring,
awesome.
Brian |
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Re: My Only Fear
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by pixie on
Tuesday, 29th June 2004 @ 12:08:01 PM AEST
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very emotional and heart felt
pixie xx |
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