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When Forever Is Never (And Built On A Lie)
Contributed by
mdmorash
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Monday, 28th June 2004 @ 11:28:15 PM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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When forever is never and built on a lie.
And a pledge is a curse when its built on deceit.
While the sun is a cloud in an ominous sky.
When all of your dreaming is now lost and awry.
Youre feeling the burden as youre smothered complete.
When forever is never and built on a lie.
The rain is now falling though you struggle to try.
To take back your reason from a darkening street.
While the sun is a cloud in an ominous sky.
Theres giving and taking. Only one makes you cry.
The answers youre given leave the mark of defeat.
When forever is never and built on a lie.
The darkness consumes you. To yourself you must lie.
And try to convince you that youve never been beat.
While the sun is a cloud in an ominous sky.
The ending is two fold, its your choice what to try.
The truth is the first step to rekindle your heat.
When forever is never and built on a lie.
While the sun is a cloud in an ominous sky.
Michael David Morash
Copyright 2004
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mdmorash
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2004-06-28 23:28:15]
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Re: When Forever Is Never (And Built On A Lie)
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by PumpkinPie on
Tuesday, 29th June 2004 @ 12:40:43 AM AEST
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Strong write,original and very interesting.You portray each stanza based on same verses,yet each one contains a different meaning all in accordance with eachother.Kudos to you Michael on a beautiful write,
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Re: When Forever Is Never (And Built On A Lie)
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by pixie on
Tuesday, 29th June 2004 @ 12:07:14 PM AEST
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this is amazingly written
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