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BLESSED 2 SURVIVE!!!!
Contributed by
neh
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Tuesday, 29th June 2004 @ 09:33:19 AM in AEST
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My life is my Dad,
Im alive ,he is dead
LIfe taught me the lesson to be bold,
n took away the comforts a father holds,
He lives by me in heart n thoughts,
n hugs me ,when things dont turn the way they ought!!!!
He forgave my mistake b4 i commited,
the world kept account,
I had to pay the price of losing a crown....
He doesnot complain or keep scores of loss or gain
He simply smiles,just a little effort ,try n live again
I owed my wrld,i had my dad
He believed in me, I was glad....
He taught me ,the lessons of life
no matter ,cum wat may ,u must survive...
He comforts me in my tears n smiles,
Lifeis always beautiful,greet it with your style...
BLESSED r those who r alive...,
I wish ,my dad had just this oppurtunity
BLESSED TO SURVIVE
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neh
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2004-06-29 09:33:19]
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Re: BLESSED 2 SURVIVE!!!!
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by Colleen on
Tuesday, 29th June 2004 @ 10:31:37 PM AEST
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| That was such a sweet poem! I think I am going to cry, it was so sad, but so sweet! Well I am glad that you know that your dad is still watching over you, and you seem okay with the fact that he is gone. Good for you! |
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