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Death is coming
Contributed by
Hearts
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Tuesday, 29th June 2004 @ 11:53:27 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I now know
I am not meant to be
in a world not so free
my mind is not in a good place
coming and going
like pictures of a last warrior
I may not be fighting on the walls
or may never hold a gun
but I still fight a war
the one inside my head
it calls out and cries
I am isolating
so the world wont see my tears
i have been pushed one too many times
hear wat my mind is going through
stop those distant sounds
of rape and violence they are growing
and I am losing my control
crying for the grave
taking my own is hard
when someone always saves your life
I just cannot keep walking with my hand on this trigger
I want to pull it and then
BANG!
Copyright ©
Hearts
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2004-06-29 11:53:27]
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Re: Death is coming
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by Lost_Shadow on
Tuesday, 29th June 2004 @ 12:06:15 PM AEST
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| A very deep and emotional poem. I enjoyed it |
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Re: Death is coming
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by pixie on
Tuesday, 29th June 2004 @ 12:31:31 PM AEST
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yes.. very deep, a great write
pixie xx |
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Re: Death is coming
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by Essentially9 on
Wednesday, 4th August 2004 @ 11:10:18 PM AEST
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| very emotional indeed. |
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Re: Death is coming
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by flamingblade on
Tuesday, 16th May 2006 @ 02:51:52 PM AEST
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Holy
hi thats very choke up-ing
nice |
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