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Where?
Contributed by
Laurel126
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Tuesday, 29th June 2004 @ 11:59:57 AM in AEST
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Where have you taken me?
To a place unknown?
My soul was left behind
Where it is no one knows
My lifeless body
Lies without its soul
I feel dead without you
Trapped with no where to go
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Laurel126
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2004-06-29 11:59:57]
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Re: Where?
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by Colleen on
Tuesday, 29th June 2004 @ 10:34:51 PM AEST
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| I really like this poem, because I could relate to the feeling. It sucks doesn't it?! Seriously, I hope that you start feeling better, and I hope things work out for you in the long run. |
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Re: Where?
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by shanarah on
Friday, 10th September 2004 @ 02:15:21 AM AEST
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| nice and short and very true, I hope you feel better. |
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