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Your Lies
Contributed by
allymp
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Tuesday, 29th June 2004 @ 12:23:50 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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All your lies are killing me
They've hurt me bad it's true
I told you to let me be
But that you couldnt do
Now I'm stuck in a corner
Sitting all alone
No friends to comfort me
Because a friend you are no more
I thought you were different
That we were best friends to the end
But I guess I was wrong
Thats the message you have sent
I wont make this mistake again
Not after what you've done
So I'll just leave
I guess that you have won
It was good while it lasted
But it will last no more
I'll just stay in my safe corner
And cry
Copyright ©
allymp
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2004-06-29 12:23:50]
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Re: Your Lies
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by pixie on
Tuesday, 29th June 2004 @ 12:33:55 PM AEST
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wow, this is very sad....... you have great talent
pixie xx |
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Re: Your Lies
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 29th June 2004 @ 03:28:30 PM AEST
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Your ending had me offguard, and I like that, as it portrays stark emotion, connected with the cold-blooded response to deception.
You write well.
Thanks for sharing it. |
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Re: Your Lies
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 22nd January 2005 @ 02:48:31 AM AEST
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| Good write. Don't let people bring you down though. You deserve better :-) |
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Re: Your Lies
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by Sinned on
Friday, 18th March 2005 @ 08:09:15 AM AEST
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Have your cry then move on.
No one can bring anyone down.
Unless you let them then your bound.
Bound in your sorrows left to dround.
Good job your anger came through well.
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