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Murky Waters Of The Mind
Contributed by
pixie
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Tuesday, 29th June 2004 @ 12:42:49 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Beginning to suffer from writers block,
All I can hear is the ticking clock,
Echoing inside my empty mind,
To inspiration Im becoming blind.
I cant keep hold of my thoughts,
My once calm mind is now feeling fraught,
A blank mist resides in my head
I have lost my writing thread.
I need to find some new ideas,
But every thing at the moment is unclear,
My brain is very tired & feels weary,
I try to look but my sights is bleary.
I hate these damn poetry droughts,
I am determined to seek new writings out,
The harder I try the more I struggle,
How do I get out if this murky puddle?
Poetry is now a big part of me,
I need to write, I need to feel free,
Without my words who am I?
I wish my sea of thought hadnt run dry.
A poet that has run out of words,
Is like a singer that can not be heard,
Writing makes me feel whole again.
Helps me to deal with my hurt & pain.
Copyright ©
pixie
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2004-06-29 12:42:49]
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Re: Murky Waters Of The Mind
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by allymp on
Tuesday, 29th June 2004 @ 01:23:52 PM AEST
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| This is a great poem. You have a lot of talent. Keep writing |
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Re: Murky Waters Of The Mind
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by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 29th June 2004 @ 08:49:32 PM AEST
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your sea hasnt run dry pixie, this is, as are all of your poems, beautifully written and lovely in style and flow:) hugs n' love nessa
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Re: Murky Waters Of The Mind
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by Coaster on
Wednesday, 30th June 2004 @ 11:03:05 AM AEST
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Wow very good write. I love the comparisons. My favorite lines are "A poet that has run out of words/ Is like a singer that can not be heard". You are very talented and I'm looking forward to reading more of your writes. Thank you.
Ryan |
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Re: Murky Waters Of The Mind
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by blueheart on
Thursday, 1st July 2004 @ 10:19:34 PM AEST
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| Great poem krissy. You did great with all the words. :) |
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