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Looking Back
Contributed by
pixie
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Tuesday, 29th June 2004 @ 12:45:24 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Looking back over the past years,
Reminiscing all the happiness & tears,
Isnt it funny how time flies,
How you never really get to say goodbyes.
Wishing you could change the past,
The moment passes you by so fast,
If given the chance to go back,
Would you swap white for black?
We all have at least one thing wed change,
Do it again differently & rearrange,
Many regrets & thinking what if?
Life just disappears down through a sieve.
Letting go of the past can be hard,
Especially when its just in the back yard,
Of your mind & that cant be erased,
But feelings of sadness can now be replaced.
One by one the bad memories disperse,
As you & your new future coerce,
But all the while you keep turning your head,
Making sure that your past is staying in bed.
Copyright ©
pixie
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2004-06-29 12:45:24]
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Re: Looking Back
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by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 29th June 2004 @ 12:53:15 PM AEST
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wow, you read my mind, pixie, funny this poems right next to the one i just posted, karma? we are twins thinking in the same vien of the past and life, wow, im blown away 'cause im all teary so excuse the lame comment, its really beautiful:) hugs n' love nessa
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Re: Looking Back
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by allymp on
Tuesday, 29th June 2004 @ 01:28:49 PM AEST
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| I love this poem and i think a lot of people can relate to it. I read a couple of your poems and they are great. Great job. |
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Re: Looking Back
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by Jackee_line on
Tuesday, 29th June 2004 @ 02:53:58 PM AEST
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| Esquisite piece of work. |
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Re: Looking Back
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by Luinil on
Wednesday, 30th June 2004 @ 09:51:16 PM AEST
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| very nicely done* |
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