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Tunnel of Hate
Contributed by
allymp
on
Tuesday, 29th June 2004 @ 02:15:33 PM in AEST
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I'm sitting all alone
Thinking in the dark
Just wondering what will happen
And when it will start
I don't know what to do
Or what I should expect
What's at the end of this tunnel
I see light, but just a spec
I feel something happening
Like a whole change of mind
I feel like laughing
And like I don't need to hide
What is this feeling?
Is someone really there?
What is this feeling?
Does someone really care?
I thought life was over
But it's really just begun
I'm done with this sadness
And ready to have fun
So let me pass through
This tunnel full of hate
I'm ready to love
And ready to escape
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allymp
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2004-06-29 14:15:33]
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Re: Tunnel of Hate
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by pixie on
Tuesday, 29th June 2004 @ 02:30:00 PM AEST
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very powerful expression... glad you are ready to leave your tunnel of hate, as hate can be very bad for you, as I well know.. great write
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Re: Tunnel of Hate
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by TheReturnOfx7 on
Tuesday, 29th June 2004 @ 03:01:39 PM AEST
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| Its hard to break a cycle of destruction, I've been trying myself to break a cycle of self destruction and believe me its not an easy battle to win.....I wish you luck |
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Re: Tunnel of Hate
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 29th June 2004 @ 03:13:41 PM AEST
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Very concise metaphor.
Well executed.
Welcome to YPDC. |
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Re: Tunnel of Hate
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 29th June 2004 @ 03:50:13 PM AEST
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| I've enjoyed reading your posts - this one is my favorite, nice work being concise and engaging. |
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Re: Tunnel of Hate
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 22nd January 2005 @ 02:44:54 AM AEST
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| Great write. So much hope in it. |
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Re: Tunnel of Hate
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by allymp on
Tuesday, 27th April 2010 @ 07:49:44 PM AEST
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I'm sitting all alone
Thinking in the dark
Just wondering what will happen
And when it will start
I don't know what to do
Or what I should expect
What's at the end of this tunnel
I see light, but just a spec
I feel something happening
Like a whole change of mind
I feel like smiling
And like I don't need to hide
What is this feeling?
Is someone really there?
What is this feeling?
Does someone really care?
I thought life was over
But it's really just begun
I'm done with this sadness
And ready to see the sun
So let me pass through
This tunnel full of hate
I'm ready to love
And ready to escape |
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