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I'll Always Love You
Contributed by
Colleen
on
Tuesday, 29th June 2004 @ 09:05:14 PM in AEST
Topic:
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I love you so much
It's hard to know my heart will never feel your loving touch
No, not again
I can't shatter my heart just as it's about to mend
Everytime I hear your voice my heart skips a beat
Our love was so sweet
But then I remember, I'm getting over you
What we had is through
When you speak, I can't look into your eyes
So instead, I look into the skies
God get this pain out of me
And you keep talking, oblivious to my hopeful plea
Your smile is so intriguing
I know you have no idea how bad my heart's bleeding
But it's hurting so bad
Why can't it be like what we had?
But I have to move on like you did so well
And you'll watch me without seeing my inner hell
I just wish you knew
I'll always love you
Copyright ©
Colleen
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2004-06-29 21:05:14]
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Re: I'll Always Love You
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by TheVoice on
Tuesday, 29th June 2004 @ 09:15:06 PM AEST
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very nice.
the voice
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Re: I'll Always Love You
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by tangle on
Tuesday, 29th June 2004 @ 09:26:34 PM AEST
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beautiful poem.... patience is the best remedy for troubled times...
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Re: I'll Always Love You
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by loveisendless on
Tuesday, 29th June 2004 @ 09:49:00 PM AEST
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GREAT WRITE! IT KEPT YOU READING FROM BEGINNING TO END!! A FANTASTIC JOB COLLEEN!!!
DAN!!!! |
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Re: I'll Always Love You
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by PumpkinPie on
Tuesday, 29th June 2004 @ 10:20:12 PM AEST
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Thanks
It's as though you wrote this for me and I truly appreciated reading this especially with what I'm dealing now-It's just so hard ya know?
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Re: I'll Always Love You
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by tifrob on
Wednesday, 30th June 2004 @ 01:48:54 AM AEST
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Very sad. But a wonderful poem.
Good Luck,
J~ |
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Re: I'll Always Love You
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by pixie on
Wednesday, 30th June 2004 @ 06:43:04 AM AEST
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awwww this is so sad....*hugs you*
pixie xx |
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Re: I'll Always Love You
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by fastpitchqt on
Wednesday, 30th June 2004 @ 08:55:39 PM AEST
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| very nice poem! I can totally relate to that! |
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Re: I'll Always Love You
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by SweetRhythm on
Thursday, 9th December 2004 @ 11:00:51 AM AEST
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Breathtaking, very good piece. Enjoyable all the way. Excellently put together. Sad topic & very touching. Can relate to the words a lot.
A job well done on this piece.
Thanks for sharing.
Corinna
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