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Sometimes I cry
Contributed by
coaster
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Tuesday, 29th June 2004 @ 11:27:05 PM in AEST
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Sometimes I loose grip and will start to cry
Slip within a sea of darkness within the sky
Only start to feel the pressure build upon my head
Feel as if there is any extra weight added I’d end up dead
More poison to be let out, more tears to be shed
More anger to be let out, more rain to be bled
Wonder if it'll be love or hate that takes my last breath
Distinguished by poverty I wonder if it can lead me to death
Life’s just a game at which no one knows the rules
We are all the victims that only rely on our given tools
Sometimes I loose grip and will start to cry
Happiness and sadness mix with the truth and lies
When I wake up and realize that I'm in another dream
I'll put my mind back to rest and say it's not what it seems
But one thing I know is that there are always others around me
And for them to see me cry is not for their eyes to see
A feeling of selfishness will begin to take control
Cuz when they saw me crying I feel their feelings are what I stole
So I will cry by myself and push to not pull
Cuz it feels so much better when my minds not full
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Re: Sometimes I cry
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by angelav on
Wednesday, 30th June 2004 @ 12:21:11 AM AEST
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| A very powerful poem. You're not alone, sometimes I loose my grip too and just start to cry. But then I remember it's my mind playing tricks, and try to tune in to spirit instead. Like you said so wisely, "Cuz it feels better when my minds not full" - Lao Tzu wrote, "I am like an idiot, my mind is so empty" - you're a wise one. Stay with it. |
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Re: Sometimes I cry
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by InnerBeautyQueen on
Wednesday, 30th June 2004 @ 01:09:56 AM AEST
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| i really felt this poem. good job. |
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Re: Sometimes I cry
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by pixie on
Wednesday, 30th June 2004 @ 06:14:04 AM AEST
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greatly expressed poem,
pixie xx |
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Re: Sometimes I cry
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by deathdrop on
Wednesday, 30th June 2004 @ 06:21:23 AM AEST
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interesting peom!
very well made up though, i really enjoyed reading the first verse, because i feel that too.
and i like it in the second verse where you've put "some times i loose my grip and will start to cry, happiness an sadness mix with truth and lies", but you mustn't forget that, this is true for every one!
this is powerful sutff, keep writing! |
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