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You
Contributed by
GRose84
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Wednesday, 30th June 2004 @ 06:48:12 AM in AEST
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Wow you
I think of you and beauty comes to mind
Unmistakable beauty
I remember the summer
My gaze at you
I was in awe
So innocent, those legs, that hair
You trying hard to draw me in
You told me I already had you
Little did you know, I had fallen long ago
Bout a year now, what can I say?
Not one day do I regret
Usually they turn to ghosts
Not you, your as lively as they come
I promise to love always
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2004-06-30 06:48:12]
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Re: You
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by MajesticPoet on
Wednesday, 30th June 2004 @ 06:50:14 AM AEST
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Very nice write. I can see your love for your mate.. Congrats to you for finding love that found you.
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Re: You
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by pixie on
Wednesday, 30th June 2004 @ 07:25:02 AM AEST
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lovely write,
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Re: You
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by LovingWhispers on
Thursday, 1st July 2004 @ 09:26:20 AM AEST
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Very upbeat and refreshing.
Love is wonderful yeah??
ok so dont answer lol...coz we all know that chocolate is hard to beat *wink*
LW
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