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Sent
Contributed by
rhei76
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Wednesday, 30th June 2004 @ 11:57:04 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I
Fell to Earth
The day I hit the ground
My recollection disturst with the wind
Moving slowly thru the ashes trying to relearn or remember holting to rethink and can't even find what I'm looking for
I was sent here for reasons unknown
Anything is possible
I know I must do something but I don't know what something is
Maybe just maybe dreams are answers and climax a sheet of something but I don't know what something is
On the day I hit the ground my mind was jaded for many years it all felt faded just
amoving down the line understanding it all will be fine
I will die soon enough
Then they will send me somewhere else
Copyright ©
rhei76
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2004-06-30 11:57:04]
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Re: Sent
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by pixie on
Wednesday, 30th June 2004 @ 12:52:11 PM AEST
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emotional and a great write, as always Rhei...
pixie xx |
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Re: Sent
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 30th June 2004 @ 01:27:26 PM AEST
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I liiked this - I think a couple of quick spell checks would make it better, I paused on a couple of words -
You always have powerful emotive writes |
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Re: Sent
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by Jenni_K on
Wednesday, 30th June 2004 @ 05:38:46 PM AEST
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Good write...great emotions shown....
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