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Assiduous Breakdown
Contributed by
sicknivesevered
on
Wednesday, 30th June 2004 @ 02:08:12 PM in AEST
Topic:
psychoticpoems
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GIVE ME THAT SMILE AND I'LL DETEST YOUR FACE
YOU'RE JUST THE SAME, LAYERED IN DIFFERENT LACE
I'VE DONE IT BEFORE, AND ALL I DO IS ERASE
ANOTHER COPY OUT OF MY HEADCASE
I FOUND - EVEN IN YOU
I FOUND - THINGS UNTRUE
I LOST - ONE MORE LIGHT
I CAN'T - FIND ONE RIGHT
SMEAR THE ROT ON TOP OF THE PAGE
ABOUT HOW I LOST ONE MORE IN A RAGE
I CAN'T SPIT ENOUGH, I'M FEEDING THE PHAGE
BUT I'LL LET YOU IN SO I CAN FEEL YOUR AGE
I just want to steal your outer-peace...
I just want the pain and lies to cease...
I failed you in the right way...
I just want to hear you say...
"I'M NOT HER!"
I'VE HEARD IT BEFORE - REST ASSURED
BUT IN MY MIND THOUGH - THERE'S ALWAYS A CURVE
I'VE MADE THEM ALL SAY IT! - BUT NOT ONE KNEW
JUST WHAT IT MEANT - JUST THOUGHT IT WAS DUE!
I FOUND - ANOTHER USED
I FOUND - ONE MISCONSTRUED
I LOST - ONE MORE LIFE
CAN I - FIND NOTHING BUT STRIFE!?
DID YOU?
DID YOU MEAN IT THIS TIME?
OR INADVERTENTLY TOYING WITH MY MIND?
DID I?
DID I FEEL THE SAME?
OF COURSE I DID - IT'LL NEVER CHANGE!
I just want to steal your outer-peace...
I just want the pain and lies to cease...
I failed you in the right way...
I just want to hear you say....
...
...say it!!!
"I'M NOT HER!"
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sicknivesevered
... [
2004-06-30 14:08:12]
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Re: Assiduous Breakdown
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by BrandySwanson on
Wednesday, 30th June 2004 @ 02:52:16 PM AEST
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this was really good very emotional write.
Brandy |
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Re: Assiduous Breakdown
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by Black13 on
Wednesday, 30th June 2004 @ 03:23:18 PM AEST
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This was very good. I liked it.
Incredible write man. |
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Re: Assiduous Breakdown
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by evilfairy on
Wednesday, 11th May 2005 @ 11:33:25 PM AEST
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ah - this i like a lot!
very impacting. it's angry and painful |
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