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Till I Die
Contributed by
MisterRight
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Tuesday, 22nd October 2002 @ 03:30:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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You ask me to show you
Then you close your eyes
You tell me to lead you
Then from my hand you shy
Youve said, I love you
And here I still cry
Youve told me you want me
But wont give us a try
You say you deserve more
More for yourself, you deny
And all the while I say
Ill love you, till I die
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2002-10-22 15:30:00]
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Re: Till I Die
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by Lovingangel4u on
Tuesday, 22nd October 2002 @ 05:36:59 PM AEST
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Hi, this is so sad. Those questions and comments were made by a person who wants, but sometimes its not so easy to have and give what you want.
Take Care,
Carmen |
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Re: Till I Die
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by Markey on
Tuesday, 22nd October 2002 @ 06:51:08 PM AEST
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| Very good write. can relate to that. keep it up. |
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Re: Till I Die
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by LOWMAN613 on
Wednesday, 23rd October 2002 @ 12:19:47 AM AEST
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| Kinda short for you,but another good write! I really hope this girl knows how you feel! Good luck Christina |
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