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Get Away
Contributed by
xxbreathlessx
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Wednesday, 30th June 2004 @ 07:51:27 PM in AEST
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i`m looking straight
but my path is curved,
i have eyes wide open
but my vision`s blurred
i`m contradicting the thought
that are racing in my solemly confused mind
lost in a world that slows down time
i cant see clear.
nothing is right
hints were thrown
curveballs to my eyes
but the song i heard
was much to my surprise
recollect my tears
so salty against my lips
breathe in pain
that lingers on my figertips
lay me down to sleep
soon confusion will fade
no more time to weep,
i have to get away.....
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2004-06-30 19:51:27]
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Re: Get Away
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by Essentially9 on
Wednesday, 30th June 2004 @ 08:23:51 PM AEST
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| you use your words well to serve your purpose. excellent write. |
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Re: Get Away
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by secretwind on
Wednesday, 30th June 2004 @ 08:52:35 PM AEST
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| As has been said "EXCELLENT!!".....I feel youon this one. |
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Re: Get Away
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by mountainhigh on
Tuesday, 6th July 2004 @ 03:43:45 PM AEST
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I sleep the sleep of the restless thought, not a care, not a worry, nor even a dream.......just what life was like and now without.......not even a sound and never more a shout.
I liked this poem much. |
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Re: Get Away
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by lilblkcat on
Friday, 23rd July 2004 @ 02:31:48 AM AEST
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| I really liked this poem. It couldnt have been written better. |
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