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Empty Sky
Contributed by
secretwind
on
Wednesday, 30th June 2004 @ 08:24:25 PM in AEST
Topic:
toughstuff
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No i don't understand
why
I have no plan
I have no dreams
silence
is all i have,
round and round
up and down
twisting
in the wind
on my way to doom.
I can't even believe
in what i see
everyone is pretending
things
are not what they seem,
out and in
I turn I spin
never knowing
never having a clue.
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secretwind
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2004-06-30 20:24:25]
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Re: Empty Sky
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by xxbreathlessx on
Wednesday, 30th June 2004 @ 08:27:42 PM AEST
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| i like it! it has a nice rhyme to it, great job..i thin i get wut ur tryin to say..don`t worry i can relate |
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Re: Empty Sky
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by Soulless on
Wednesday, 30th June 2004 @ 08:31:15 PM AEST
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Beautiful ways of expressing, I especially like how the title just blended right in. as said before, it has a nice rythme.
Kisses,
~Soulless~ |
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Re: Empty Sky
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by emystar on
Thursday, 1st July 2004 @ 03:39:04 AM AEST
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I hear ya.
I think we all feel this way at times.
Good work.
luv, huggs,
emy |
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