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Kyo
Contributed by
kittiekat
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Wednesday, 30th June 2004 @ 11:20:30 PM in AEST
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Freezing underneathe the bottom floor
Num on the inside and out
No feeling to show my emotions
Every second feels like being
Tortured alive during the flame blows
One by one eating me away
Leaving nothing behind
Like a desert stranded on this mad world
Just end this by stabbing me in the back
Letting my wounds swell and bruise
Copyright ©
kittiekat
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2004-06-30 23:20:30]
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Re: Kyo
(User Rating: 1 )
by Mortis-Dark on
Thursday, 1st July 2004 @ 01:20:14 AM AEST
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This poem isnt a regluar poem which in fact makes it very great. I like the way the lines flowed and blended. Anger and depression are the best tools for writing.
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