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Gone
Contributed by
juliette
on
Tuesday, 22nd October 2002 @ 08:00:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Within your maze, stumbling through this room-
Too many sounds, I can't find you.
I took a spill, guess you took a few
I woke up here in the middle of all we're going through-
You know I would swallow you to keep you safe,
Choke back the bitter, pi**y taste,
Of all your sins I can't erase,
Carry your tainted soul in my embrace.
But it seems your woes outweigh my own
And you're the only one who can bring you home
To me.
Copyright ©
juliette
... [
2002-10-22 20:00:00]
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Re: Gone
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by LOWMAN613 on
Wednesday, 23rd October 2002 @ 12:14:04 AM AEST
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| I think the ending is fine! Good poetry! Christina |
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Re: Gone
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by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Wednesday, 23rd October 2002 @ 12:15:51 AM AEST
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| The ending is great.... good work juliette |
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Re: Gone
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by marshmalloska on
Monday, 14th March 2005 @ 07:21:11 AM AEST
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Hi there i hope that the anger and sadness is beggining to subside, you dont deserve to be this unhappy. Be strong =)
Matthew |
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