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Heaven Above
Contributed by
parkman
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Thursday, 1st July 2004 @ 12:30:58 PM in AEST
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Blood running down my wrist
As I slash across my arm
I cannot seem to clench my fist
To the tendons, I've done harm
I watch it drip, from my finger tips
Crimson on my sheet
I think about your tender lips
As death, I prepare to meet
Your eyes, yes I see them shine
Glowing, radiating, love
And know, you will always be mine
When we meet, in heaven, above
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2004-07-01 12:30:58]
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Re: Heaven Above
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by Sirena_Degana on
Thursday, 1st July 2004 @ 12:46:52 PM AEST
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i understand how you feel, one of my friends died and i contemplated doing the same thing....but keep your head high!!!
blessed be
sirena |
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Re: Heaven Above
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by Silent-No-More on
Thursday, 1st July 2004 @ 01:15:49 PM AEST
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I found this..... chilling, I guess. It's kind of got a "pow" to it if you know what I mean. A few very different emotions at work here, I think. And... yeh... I like it that way.
Great write. I enjoyed it! |
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Re: Heaven Above
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by emystar on
Thursday, 1st July 2004 @ 01:40:20 PM AEST
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Very, very sad but written wel.
luv, huggs, prayer,
emy |
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Re: Heaven Above
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by pixie on
Thursday, 1st July 2004 @ 01:56:37 PM AEST
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aww this is very sad, but well expressed,
pixie xx |
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Re: Heaven Above
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Thursday, 1st July 2004 @ 07:37:59 PM AEST
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It hurts to lose a friend, I know that one well,
But life goes on and always remember they are where it really counts, deep with your heart,beautiful poem.
Take care. |
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