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Darkness Falls
Contributed by
monkey
on
Thursday, 1st July 2004 @ 03:42:44 PM in AEST
Topic:
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a confused
and devasted soul
stands alone
in the swirling blue haze
of the harsh,
cruel world
this shattered being,
frozen in place
like a glass statue,
seems so perfect
and beautiful
when on the inside
shes lost inthe darkness
and cant find the light
that will guide her empty soul
back to a world of intangible beauty
once a great white dove
her delicate wings
can no longer
carry her with grace
her porcalin colored face,
wet with tears
from all the pain
and heartbreak
she's kept locked up
and hidden from everyone
for so long
not sure
she can carry this burden
any longer
she wants to give up
and fall into a world
where she can become invisable
and be happy again
then
through the darkness
she hears a heavenly voice,
and sees a shining spirit
with an outstretched hand,
offering to help the girl
soar once again
Copyright ©
monkey
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2004-07-01 15:42:44]
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Re: Darkness Falls
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by pixie on
Thursday, 1st July 2004 @ 03:44:44 PM AEST
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wow amazing dark write,
pixie xx |
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Re: Darkness Falls
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by neglected1 on
Thursday, 1st July 2004 @ 03:49:22 PM AEST
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i liked how you went from dark to light... it seems like the girl in your poem will do well... Great write keep it up
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Re: Darkness Falls
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by little_genna on
Thursday, 1st July 2004 @ 04:22:14 PM AEST
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this is just beautiful though a lil sad. great write.
love and hugs
gen xx |
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Re: Darkness Falls
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Thursday, 1st July 2004 @ 07:27:58 PM AEST
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| A dark write, beautifully done and so full of sadness, Awesome job, a very gripping poem. |
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Re: Darkness Falls
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by wakegurl77 on
Friday, 2nd July 2004 @ 11:13:00 AM AEST
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beautifully written to count the times i've felt that way would not even be possible but allways a hand stretches tward me and saves me from my pain i wish i could say the same for everyone i guess we're lucky to have people to save us with an outstretched hand.
allways sincere
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Re: Darkness Falls
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by BrandySwanson on
Monday, 5th July 2004 @ 08:37:20 PM AEST
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beautiful dark write very sad as well. great poem.
Brandy |
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