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Lonley
Contributed by
k8n07
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Thursday, 1st July 2004 @ 04:33:38 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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I wish you were here with me,
I am in so much pain,
Where are you?
Without you Im going insane.
I miss you,
I want you here with me,
I cant stand this anymore,
Please hurry quickly.
I need you to come,
If you dont Ill die,
Im telling you the truth,
I wouldnt lie.
Yes, youre here!
Im so glad,
Where have you been?
Ive been so sad.
Please stay with me forever,
We can live in peace together,
You say you have to leave,
No you wont, never!
Now youre gone,
Please come back,
I will suffer deeply,
Ill have a heart attack.
I dont understand this,
Where are you off to?
Youre not the guy I knew,
Whats wrong with you?
How could you do this to me?
After all weve been through,
Youve changed,
Who are you?
Copyright ©
k8n07
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2004-07-01 16:33:38]
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Re: Lonley
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by pixie on
Thursday, 1st July 2004 @ 04:37:39 PM AEST
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Awwww this is so sad, great write tho
pixie xx |
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Re: Lonley
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by MLCstar on
Thursday, 1st July 2004 @ 05:08:50 PM AEST
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| Keep them comming. You are remarkably talented. The emotions are so strongly conveyed. |
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Re: Lonley
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by hawaii06 on
Thursday, 1st July 2004 @ 08:08:17 PM AEST
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very good write! Keep it up!
Love,
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